What would I do without a mind?
What would I do without a society to shape that mind?
To influence it?
To taint it?
To glorify it?
What would I do without the memories of such glory and such tache?
An orphan on a deserted island, with nothing from the outside world, save the produce of Nature which surrounds me.
I suppose I would be free....
Monday, April 27, 2009
Solitary
To a mind that holds Faces, follies, feuds, fervour The lake shows just me.
Profound. Great. Beautiful. Unbelievable. This haiku is not too light as haikus usually are. But what a wonderful thought!
The image is in absolute synchrony with the words.
Very nice. I am transported to a realm of truth where all dross in me automatically becomes irrelevant and only the bare, pared down truth of my being stays and is seen and sees.
Profound. Great. Beautiful. Unbelievable. This haiku is not too light as haikus usually are. But what a wonderful thought!
ReplyDeleteThe image is in absolute synchrony with the words.
Very nice. I am transported to a realm of truth where all dross in me automatically becomes irrelevant and only the bare, pared down truth of my being stays and is seen and sees.
Highly spiritual.
Dear P,
ReplyDeleteGlad you found it so. The image has sat with me for a very long time and I didn't know where to use it until now! :-)