tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post116574273369262068..comments2024-03-24T10:29:28.588+05:30Comments on like a feather....: FadingErotemehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-75770552054721398632007-06-26T11:30:00.000+05:302007-06-26T11:30:00.000+05:30I found this quite funny: As if she ate for a high...I found this quite funny: <BR/><I>As if she ate for a higher purpose -<BR/>And I, for none.</I> :-) <BR/>It was a good shot.. Well put, as if the experience itself had been yours at some point in life.. I recall the same thing happening to me when I was young..Of course, I didn't stop pestering my then <I>once best-friend</I> until she told me everything!! :-)<BR/>What you mentioned here does happen, but eventually.. not over a span of days or weeks or months, but over years, by which time both friends usually cross over the thin divide between a girl and a woman.. Hence, had the protagonist been a young boy, I think the situation would've been more believable, 'cause then the confusion and heartache would be understandable.. girls usually understand.<BR/><I>And I had to choose<BR/>From girls or<BR/>Women ashamed.. </I> Summarizes a lot many things.Munmunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632240598954328744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1165838524210770162006-12-11T17:32:00.000+05:302006-12-11T17:32:00.000+05:30Dear Anon, Glad you liked it. :-)Dear S, ...Dear Anon,<BR/> Glad you liked it. :-)<BR/><BR/>Dear S,<BR/> Glad you liked those lines. :-)<BR/><BR/>Dear S,<BR/> Glad you found it so. :-)Erotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1165836872958431712006-12-11T17:04:00.000+05:302006-12-11T17:04:00.000+05:30flowed very well. beautiful seems to be the most s...flowed very well. <BR/><BR/>beautiful seems to be the most suitable compliment to such a poemSanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17542542549895543741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1165770990783790292006-12-10T22:46:00.000+05:302006-12-10T22:46:00.000+05:30As if she ate for a higher purpose -And I, for non...<I>As if she ate for a higher purpose -<BR/>And I, for none.</I><BR/><BR/>Beautiful :)Shhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16991504340370259469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1165754970728580212006-12-10T18:19:00.000+05:302006-12-10T18:19:00.000+05:30Real and beautiful free style of verses.Real and beautiful free style of verses.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com