tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post111779955570607019..comments2024-03-24T10:29:28.588+05:30Comments on like a feather....: And I felt her leave...Erotemehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1118900363822423162005-06-16T11:09:00.000+05:302005-06-16T11:09:00.000+05:30Dear ammani, Thanks.Dear Baejaar, :-) Th...Dear ammani,<BR/> Thanks.<BR/><BR/>Dear Baejaar,<BR/> :-) Thanks. Glad you like it...<BR/><BR/>Dear KK,<BR/> Welcome to the show! Thanks. You really do not need my writing to inspire; you are really fine already... :-)Erotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1118899261350653012005-06-16T10:51:00.000+05:302005-06-16T10:51:00.000+05:30Oh Eroteme,This is so sad :-( am really glad I dro...Oh Eroteme,<BR/>This is so sad :-( <BR/>am really glad I dropped by,<BR/>am inspired by your beautiful writing.kaaju katlihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12836566094781177700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1118175187633772632005-06-08T01:43:00.000+05:302005-06-08T01:43:00.000+05:30Simple and beautiful.......Simple and beautiful.......Baejaarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09299875481589758347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1118149815100508812005-06-07T18:40:00.000+05:302005-06-07T18:40:00.000+05:30An unimaginable loss captured with a quiet poignan...An unimaginable loss captured with a quiet poignance. The last line about sums it up. Thank you.ammanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09002764562048409240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1118126193918697172005-06-07T12:06:00.000+05:302005-06-07T12:06:00.000+05:30Dear GI, We really seem to be generations apar...Dear GI,<BR/> We really seem to be generations apart... :-|<BR/><BR/>Dear Meera,<BR/> Thank you. I am glad it is mute and not moot!! ;-)Erotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1118035876282187582005-06-06T11:01:00.000+05:302005-06-06T11:01:00.000+05:30Bravo.[and I shall go no further for fear of spoil...Bravo.<BR/>[and I shall go no further for fear of spoiling the moment of mute appreciation.]Meerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071364623578237334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117907404910300002005-06-04T23:20:00.000+05:302005-06-04T23:20:00.000+05:30By Daadi I meant Paati....You wrote about your ne...By Daadi I meant Paati....You wrote about your next generation and I wrote about the previous generation......Shoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18120226121104956412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117901396915069082005-06-04T21:39:00.000+05:302005-06-04T21:39:00.000+05:30Dear GI, Why did I say "Daaaa....di..."? She ...Dear GI,<BR/> Why did I say "Daaaa....di..."? She says Daddy... :-oErotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117901225968157412005-06-04T21:37:00.000+05:302005-06-04T21:37:00.000+05:30Dear GI, WOW! That's neat... thanks for shari...Dear GI,<BR/> WOW! That's neat... thanks for sharing that... :-)Erotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117885733162425072005-06-04T17:18:00.000+05:302005-06-04T17:18:00.000+05:30Here is next paragraph to your poem......She held ...Here is next paragraph to your poem......<BR/><BR/><BR/>She held my hand for support, like she had always given me. Her fingers were wrinkled.....the wrinkles of the life well lived.<BR/><BR/>She smiled for one last time with a twinkle in her eyes....<BR/><BR/>Daaaa....di....I said......<BR/><BR/>She was leaving me......<BR/><BR/>How I wanted to stop her!!<BR/><BR/>But she had seen it all and How can she stay even if she wanted to....Her completely ripened spring of life had aged through the summer and reached the fall...<BR/><BR/>Winter will come making it hard without her<BR/><BR/>After a full circle of seasons, spring will return<BR/><BR/>Giving me strength in life that she had always given meShoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18120226121104956412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117880895081323342005-06-04T15:58:00.000+05:302005-06-04T15:58:00.000+05:30Dear Prabha, Been quite a while, indeed. Beli...Dear Prabha,<BR/> Been quite a while, indeed. Believe it or not, I woke up today (siesta) and was wondering "WHere's Prabha?" !! And here I get a comment from you. Never really happened before to me...<BR/><BR/>Dear A,<BR/> Thank you. Glad you like it :-)Erotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117877935172095722005-06-04T15:08:00.000+05:302005-06-04T15:08:00.000+05:30Hi eroteme!Been a while...Nice one..esp the "Daah-...Hi eroteme!<BR/>Been a while...<BR/>Nice one..esp the "Daah-dee" :)Prabhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17514930062117573929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117869392482601462005-06-04T12:46:00.000+05:302005-06-04T12:46:00.000+05:30Dear Eroteme, you rock! :). I loved it.:)Dear Eroteme, you rock! :). I loved it.:)Anuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15404497270479761723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117857031136971082005-06-04T09:20:00.000+05:302005-06-04T09:20:00.000+05:30Dear W, Thanks... thanks again... :-)Dear GI, ...Dear W,<BR/> Thanks... thanks again... :-)<BR/><BR/>Dear GI,<BR/> Thank you. Glad you liked it...<BR/><BR/>Dear M&B,<BR/> Thank you. Glad you found it to your taste.Erotemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677513867884448593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117833859703721822005-06-04T02:54:00.000+05:302005-06-04T02:54:00.000+05:30Beautiful.You will make a great daah-dee :)Beautiful.You will make a great daah-dee :)wookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01140101628004299446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117831497375492502005-06-04T02:14:00.000+05:302005-06-04T02:14:00.000+05:30Nice post.Touching. But very sad.Nice post.Touching. But very sad.Shoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18120226121104956412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9766640.post-1117803951132232672005-06-03T18:35:00.000+05:302005-06-03T18:35:00.000+05:30"Would her little torso lift against the weight of..."Would her little torso lift against the weight of death?"<BR/>It is simply wonderful.Tragic but beautiful.<BR/>M&BAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com